wanna hear me sing?

[BlurOfSerenity]

i put a song i wrote on my website.
more hopefully soon to follow.
http://www.batwing.org/songs.html .
recorded with soundrecorder, about 60 seconds long.
i know i'm not great...
but constructive criticism is ok.

 

[IDLEchild]

Hmmm with that voice lets see....don't go into pop music with fabricated beats....

slow down your pace and pick up a guitar...get really good with the guitar and write more meaningful lyrics and you've got a possible career as a credible artist.

Your voice is meant for more hand played intrument driven music then pop dance music. IMO anyway.

 

[BlurOfSerenity]

if i told you how happy that comment made me, i 'm not sure if you'd believe me
*HUGS*

 

[Rose]

I think it was a good song. "Bob"'s right - acoustic guitar or other string instrament would be grand. Your voice is really soft, which isn't a bad thing, but everynow and then you could really hear the feeling behind it - practice more with that. It sounded nice.

Got that jingle stuck in my head the first couple hours of work, too.