Rejection (most recent poem)

[lacemyster]

A vision of beauty
the goddess within
an ugly picture
mother of the sea
bitter and weak
screaming at her sadness
floods and storms
leave from her eyes
and aches for eternity
in the garden of man.

There was only lust
now she is crushed
she beats her body with a knife
blood flows down
now she has the power
to destroy everything
with her rejected soul.

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Comments please.

 

[Squiggy]

You've quite a talent for this, Lace. I'm impressed.

 

[Luis G]

kinda cruel poem, but nice

 

[BlurOfSerenity]

very well done!

 

[a13antichrist]

Who's the lucky guy?

 

[lacemyster]

Who's the lucky guy?

Never thought of that. This poem is just about a woman getting rejected, no specific story or anything.

 

[Leslie]

I LOVE your stuff, lacey, keep it coming!